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Luckvv
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the concept of this book is really nice to think about but the execution is just horrible, the author repeats the same plot over and over just with different characters there's far too many plot holes to count and literally every single minot or major antagonist always say or think the exact same thing about the mc with zero originality. mc meets Mr bad man, Mr bad man severely underestimate s the mc and acts all high and mighty repeating the same scene over and over even when the mc becomes extremely well known and powerful its the exact same thing the Mr big bad acts like they've never heard of him(even if they have) and assume he's weak simply because he's not them even though he has several outstanding achievements under his belt. Again the execution of the premise is horrible. p.s. sorry for the long read

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End of the Magic Era

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Hello there, since last year my friend is writing a book. His book is about bloodlines, kingdoms, and superpowers. The problem is he is not getting any support. I told him to share on a couple of sites but it didn't get any attention. If you guys can check that out and leave a comment it would be really good for him. Have a good day. The book's name is: Wolf Bloodline