Review Detail of dragonslayernjd in End of the Magic Era

Don't read this book if you think it's going to be amazing, you will only leave disappointed. The book overall is average at best, I don't understand why there are so many 5 star reviews here. But anyways, let me explain why I think this book is average at best. First of all, let's talk about translation quality. The translation quality is truly amazing, I have found only 1 grammar mistake in 100 chapters which is truly something the author should feel happy about. The translation quality really does show how much the author cares about this novel. Stability of Updates This novel has good Stability of Updates, the author almost always gets the 1 chapter a week quota, rarely ever missing the deadline. I don't have much more to say about Stability of Updates. Story Development Story development is just god awful and is why I dropped this novel fairly early on (200 chapters). Every time I tried to read this novel, it felt like I was being forced to. There's almost no development in the story, you just feel like you see the same thing over and over again just written differently. There's also no defined arcs because of how the story development is so terribly written. You will get hooked to this novel for the first 30 chapters, and then find it terribly boring to the point of rather watching paint dry on YouTube. Character Design Wow, where do I even get started? The Character Design is just... not good in this novel. Let me explain, in the novel Mason obviously doesn't like Mafa, but dude you failed so many times on 'teaching mafa a lesson' that it's even laughable, yet you still don't give up. It's like Mason's a fish trying to climb a tree, and when he fails to climb it, he calls the tree lucky. The other characters in this novel are average, having no unique traits about them. Half of the characters are arrogant when they meet Mafa, but when they hear how amazing he is, they instantly become respectful and revere him as a god. World Backround The world background in this book is good. This is basically the only redeeming quality this novel has other than Translation Quality. The reason why I praise the world background in this novel so heavily, is because it truly is amazing. The author uses words that vividly describe the certain situation the MC is in. Almost every paragraph I was imagining a picture of what the paragraph was mentioning. Conclusion Ahhhhh, finally we are at the end of this long review. To sum it all up, it could be a good novel, but it just isn't because it get's boring and repetitive incredibly quick. If you truly have nothing else to read, and I mean NOTHING, then you can go ahead and give this novel a try. But be ready to drop the novel around 50-200 chapters. For the rest of you that got past 200 chapters, congratulations. You deserve a medal for accomplishing a feat which I would never be able to.