The MC doesn’t seem to care about...anything! What is his main drive? Why should we root for him? Who cares if antagonists stand in his way when even he doesn’t seem to have a shred of investment in the other characters. Will he try to change the future? Will he rebuild his family’s Business? Even Leylin from “Warlock of the Magus World” wanted to acheive immortality. I hope this story gets better. I hope the author creates a reason to follow the MC.
Zhuang Bifan
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LIKETitanx328:His goal is to become the strongest mage because he wants to be strong which I s shown through out the novel.