Review Detail of Kiiara in Struggle Of Love

I love the story since I’m a romance novel lover. The relationship between the two main characters are vividly depicted. The conversation went smoothly and didn’t sound awkward. I love the idea at the beginning when you introduced them like in the prologue. So I got a little bit of hint what’s gonna happen. Now onto the writing. Some of your paragraphs are too long so consider breaking it down because it may not be easy on the eyes for the readers and when you break the paragraph it’ll help u build the story’s *******. For grammar, I’m not gonna say much because it’s already good. Maybe just tiny minor mistakes which you can definitely take care of. Thank you for the good chapters. Good luck for your second volume! 😁