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Review Detail of HaremQueen in Zoro transmigrate in the Hunter x Hunter World !

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Chapter 2, and dropped immediately! The grammar is mostly fine except for misspellings that occur about 20 times per chapter. Need more punctuation to be placed in various places. Kushina not liking Minato because he was too much of a “sissy”. That, I got a problem with. Not only is it not true, it was incredibly forced and vague. Kurenai hating Asuma who loved her since their academy days is also incredibly forced. The best part? The author didn’t even give a reason for it. I can just imagine this novel to be one of those that has the mc live out the wet dreams of the author. No need to read further than chapter one to know that the novel is sh*t and not worth my time.

Zoro transmigrate in the Hunter x Hunter World !

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