The concept of the story is interesting, but the author ruïnes it by tossing in endless chapters of flashbacks to years past whenever things get interesting. Its a nasty habit that doesn't truly add much to the story. In fact it sounds more like the author is trying to vent his frustrations with some fantasy of how he wished he had responded to them, be it for better or worse. All in all. The zombie and system part is awesome. The story is well written and the only things against it are the major flashbacks, I'll timing there of and the time wasted on MC playing emo ranger.
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