A great novel . I truly like the auther's thinking i creating an amazing story from the orignal series and the story I have read so far is amazing. One of the things I wanted request the auther is that if Nie li and ji ren are both MC's than they should be given equallay great roles and abillites and not somthing like ji ren becoming Nie li sidekick like charecter which seams to be the case in the current story or atleast that's the vibe I am getting. Anothet thing is the brand new love story b/w Ji Ren and Ning'er . In the orgnal series while ning'er role was great and I personaly like her better than Ye ziyan but she was always shown weaker then her in every aspect of the story which i rely hated so if possible like Ji Ren can make her stronger than the orignal series and no longer inferior than that will be great. Any way good luck for writting a great novel and I hope u dont drop it and leave half way ..................😊😊😊
LeoSerafino
Liked by 3 people
LIKEAlright . Looking forward to it. P.S: If u can give Ning'er a better talent and cultivation technique than the orignal than it be great.
LeoSerafino:Of course Ji Ren Is no side kick, it's only been 8 chapters so it might seem like that but I assure you that they will have their own story lines and not Just them, Ning'er too. Anyway thanks for reviewing and thanks for your encouragement.
LeoSerafino:Of course Ji Ren Is no side kick, it's only been 8 chapters so it might seem like that but I assure you that they will have their own story lines and not Just them, Ning'er too. Anyway thanks for reviewing and thanks for your encouragement.