Review Detail of Zeno in Superpowers? Yes please!

This story is very good, to make it better, I recommend the author to imagine that he is the MC, imagining that he is in his own novel, you can do better descriptions of the battle scenes, etc, I recommend reading the novel ¨The Defeated Dragon'' can find it in novel updates, it is a novel where it seems that the author of truth is inside the novel, there is a lot of detail, he would not know how to describe it, although he advances slowly, it is enjoyable, maybe if he reads it give him some inspiration and write better his novel or make longer chapters, in another comment leave a great idea or suggestion to the author on how you can develop your novel.