Review Detail of dragonslayernjd in Sovereign of the Karmic System

This story really has provided me with a couple of hours of comfort, but alas, everything good comes to an end. I have read up to where I dropped this novel (chapter 150), and I can confidently say that this book is pretty decent. The book has pros and cons, and I will begin to discuss those as of now. Writing Quality: 4/5 The writing quality in this story, for the most part, is really good with only a few minor grammar mistakes every chapter. Of course, I gave it a 4/5 because of those few grammar mistakes, but of course the writing quality is easily read and those grammar mistakes are so small that you usually can just gloss over them without even noticing it. Stability of Updates: 4/5 Don't have much to say about this one other than the author usually uploads chapters quite frequently. Story Development: 3/5 The story development in this novel is surprisingly good the first 100 chapters, but it kind of takes a turn for the worse after that. Let me explain, in the earlier chapters the pacing is quite good, not too fast and not too slow. But the deeper you dive into the story, the more confusing stuff gets, and the story development kind of plummets. I cannot provide any examples unfortunately due to the fact that I would have to put a spoiler tag on it, and I would rather not do so as to attract a bigger audience to read my review. Character Design: 4/5 The characters in this story are well thought out, they each have their own personalities, their own goals, and each and every character has something unique to them that makes them more likeable, or unlikeable depending on which the story wants you to think them as. For example, some characters are arrogant young masters meant to make you dislike them, while the friends of Daniel are more intricate and more detailed, to make them more likeable as a person. World Background: 5/5 The main thing this story is good for (in my opinion) is the world background and the amount of detail the author manages to squeeze into a page. I don't have much else to say for world background because all I can say about it is that it lets you be able to picture what the author is writing. Conclusion/Overall: 4/5 stars Obviously this book is a must try, it will most likely appeal to most of the people that read this book at first, but the deeper the story gets, the more people that dropped this book are going to be found. Thank you to the author for giving me the chance to write this review, and I hope you continue to improve in the art of writing.