Review Detail of Gerald_Morris_9274 in Lord Shadow

The writing needs serious work. The grammar is poor which leads to miss used words or incorrect adjectives, and odd phrasing. It's good enough for the reader to know what he meant but when your brain constantly has to auto correct and reread paragraphs gets to be frustrating. The story itself is really good. I applaud the writer on his creativity and encourage him to continue. It is obvious this is not your first language and that makes this even more impressive. keep working at it, you will go far and if you can correct the grammar and phrasing I could see this becoming a popular story!