Review Detail of LiemV in Lord Shadow

Dropped this novel Writting quality is okay Story dev sucks as hell, if the author make a movie then the story is okay. But for a novel this is too much, the story “branch” is just way too much. Me as reader hardly capable to keep up with all the shit happened. The timeline “idea” is great but not to this extent. There are too many world background (planet A/B/C, galaxies, myth, gods, etc). And the transition is way too fast, like chapter 1 at earth, chapter 2 at other planet, then chapter 3 back to earth again, and then chapter 5/6 move to other galaxy story. Character design is great but again too many. The author litteraly have many cahracters from diff mythology, and bad news is as a reader i dont even know which one is important and which one is not, cause the author make like a half chap introductions for these characters. For world background i dont need to say anymore cause its the same as the prev review, TOO MANY! The positive is that we as readers will get a whole details, way too details, of a story i guess.