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Currently at chapter 100~110, The beginning was good with good character design, world development and a solid plot that would have the MC be the character he was portrayed in the summary of novel. The First companion plot the development of the relationship and how it abruptly ended and growth of the MC was exceptionally well portrayed and was immersed into the story and the future developments of MC had such potential, but the concurrent development feels like there are multiple authors with their own stories and the author of this story stopped writing his own and suddenly started to integrate the various authors concepts, plots into his own story and thereby completely obliterating the potential and the MC character design that changes to fit a plot or an event like a chameleon. Due the continuous changes in the story that the author wants to Portray, the characters lose their individuality and are forced to change their personality to fit the changed plot without thought or reason. This makes it very hard for the reader such as myself to immerse myself into the character. The author introduces a obscene amount of content, but majority are discarded within 10 ~20 chapters of the novel and no explanation is given and expect the readers to just forget about it. Finally of the 100 chapters I have read I feel like I have read 5 stories from 5 different authors with their own style of writing mashed together into 1 story with abrupt beginning and endings and an MC as an marionette to fit the roles of all different great stories. This novel is a very first frustrating novel to myself, I usually read around 20~50 Chapters of novel to decide whether I binge the chapters to latest available on a weekend or just trash it as it doesn't suit me and just completely move on, but this novel really frustrates me. I can't seem to completely trash it as it still interests me and I can't seem to binge read it either because it frustrates the hell out me due to constant changes in the MC character, the dropped plot and many more and but it interests me enough to calm my frustrations and continue reading. Am gonna end my rant now and will continue if there is more in the later chapters.

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