Okay I finished reading itand here what I think about it 1 the magic is briliant and personnaly I liked the use of latin 2 the main caracters are fleshed out but the rest feel shallow but not 2d 3 the caracter develepment is either non exictent or abrubt 4 the romence just egnor it because it feels forced and reason for that is the fact that it is only hinted to once or twice so unless you are focused you wiĺl miss it and boom suprise 5 and finnaly the worst thing about it is the end it feels off I know what the auther wanted to turn it into a twist but it appeared that he just did not want the MC to stay dead
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