Review Detail of The_Master_Zen in Naruto System Within Naruto

Just.. he manipulates babies and children who he knows will be beautiful in the future into becoming his wives. The best defence I have seen to this is 'This is fanfiction, not real life, so stop discouraging the author, it's not like he's making money off this.' You know what I say to that? If you're gonna write this shit, then stop writing. I'm not gonna be kind and say 'author if you stop being such a perverted cunt then maybe your story will improve', no, I'm outright saying that if the best you can come up with is manipulating babies and kids into marrying your MC, then just become a reader, because this is shit that just shouldn't be written. If your grammar and sentence structure sucks, that's fine. If you get a few facts mixed up, it's alright. If you make power levels unrealistic and boring, it's still fine, you can always improve and I encourage you to do just that! But this shit will get no such encouragement, if you posted this on Royal Road or something you wouldn't get past the first chapter before it gets taken down, you wouldn't even be able to get it submitted. I don't know why there are pedophile MC's on this site, but I know it's disgusting. Even Judge Judy is disappointed in you.