Review Detail of SemiDemiHemiEvil in Naruto System Within Naruto

I found this novel just by accident (by viewing someone's profile) and decided to give it a try without even reading its info (it's my fault, it's description shows that it's not Naruto System, but more like Boruto System which I despise). At first I wanted to at least finish reading the prolog, but I was forced to drop it after 10 chapters. Why? There are the reasons: 1) Author don't know how to mark out speech. Instead of anything like "I want to say it."[someone's name] Or "it's what I want!" - shouted someone. We have Hey, do you see what I'm telling you? : Name 2) Author can't do naming. There's mexican names, Chinese names, random set of sounds but there isn't any Japanese names or even close to it. From comments I learnt that there was even mistakes in original story's names but fortunately he fixed it. 3) Author knew nothing about Naruto world. MC's parents are two weakling who was cast away from their clan because of their ridiculously weird names (at least it's the only conclusion that I come to after 10 chapters) but they can create quite a number of Shadow clones without much care. Not to mention that it's a konoha forbidden jutsu, Shadow Clone jutsu requires elite jonin level reserves just to summon a few... 4) Unnecessary info dumps like pages of researching the chronology of the main events just to figure out what the year it is. 5) Poor English. Usually I wouldn't even notice it, since not only nobody is perfect but also with my reading speed I would automatically correct it in my mind, but something like "I'm aftering those who escaped" is beyond even my capabilities. At first I even read it as altering, because it at least makes sentence, even though it's nonsense. Someone even corrected it in the comments, but author don't care. 6) Character development is awful. Quick sample: where would you find a parent that would travel with its one month old child to a city knowing that it's dangerous. And you now why? Because kid smiled after hearing the name of the city... In fact I kinda would love to read a novel about Naruto's world. Anybody knows anything decent?