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DaoistEFB
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hey, i think making one with Naruto is a good idea, but have you ever thought about maybe in the future making one with One Piece or Dragon Ball

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Naruto System Within Naruto

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Cute_Melon
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The one with onepiece is horny trash

Dark_Magma
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i have to agree with u

Cute_Melon:The one with onepiece is horny trash
Dark_Magma
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though dragon ball is one of my fav animes(no 1 anime actually) i still find it difficult myself to imagine the author capable of making an original story out of dragon ball other than addinv new characters as there is little known about races as such the author needs to be extremely creative about new powers

Hsuya
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Why?

Cute_Melon:The one with onepiece is horny trash
luffy1996
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The OP Main characters are M/F twins with a devil fruit that connects their senses and soul. The guy twin has a harem while his sister has a reverse harem... And when they go r-18 it gets really weird for the reader, it would be less disturbing for everyone if it was simply ******.

Hsuya:Why?
Hsuya
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luffy1996:The OP Main characters are M/F twins with a devil fruit that connects their senses and soul. The guy twin has a harem while his sister has a reverse harem... And when they go r-18 it gets really weird for the reader, it would be less disturbing for everyone if it was simply ******.
Stuffedcrow
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honestly I have to say that this naruto fan fiction is one of the worst I've seen, and is the only novel by seion I absolutely hate. the mc by the start of cannon is nothing but an ancient pedophile and the story itself is bland

Donovan_Mullin
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He should have never saved his parents

malinizgeldii
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Pedo pedo pedo