Bing just an average reader like I am what I have to say isn't important and is just how I feel inside. It's concept and plot devices are good and the characters are unique in a way. But with the slow and unsteady releases it's makes the book hard to dive into. I feel this is the type that's better read all at once where you can get lost in the book and let it flow threw you. But with the release rate it's read more in sections which make it harder to dive in and get lost. I would suggest to either lengthen the chapters as much as you can or to post them in groups so as to have less cliff hangers more flow and greater emotion attachment. It's like surfing. Instead of riding many small waves it would be more enjoyable to get it all in one big wave.
Afternoone
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LIKEAfternoone:The release rate would increase next month. This month, my schedule is mostly filled.