Review Detail of Afternoone in Cult of Chaos and Order

HAHAHA I am going to be shameless and rate my novel 5 stars. This is first novel i have written. I hope to obtain some feedback as well as your thoughts on the story or character. I already have a rough idea on how this novel is going to go and stable release of chapters cannot be guaranteed for the first month as i will be busy. This may or may not be my new hobby depending on my inspiration and mood. If this does reasonably well i may consider writing other novels as i already have many ideas.Thank you and most importantly happy reading ;)