Review Detail of Aristocrat613 in Adopted Soldier

I don't even know who or what the rezkin of King's dark tidings fame is. Though I do admit I need an editor, but telling me I copied something that I have no knowledge about is, hmm I don't know what to feel. Well sorry for the terrible writing quality, hope you find a better novel to read.

Then you need to read that series (I think there's 4 books out). It's fantastic, both literally and figuratively. If you want me to be more specific about your writing, you have issues with grammar and transitions. If I had the time, I'd edit for you, because you are writing a fun and quirky story. I wasn't trying to say that you were copying necessarily, just that since I've seen the concept done before with more technically proficient author and an amazing MC, the issues in the writing quality were more obvious to me. I think it's an amazing thing that two different authors can come up with the same gag concept. Kudos to you on that,

Thanks I guess, seeing that english is kinda like the third language I learned makes it a bit difficult for me, sometime I even write a different language all together before realizing I was suppose to be writing in english. Will try to read those books when I have the time.