Review Detail of BabyTanuki in Adopted Soldier

This was a fun story to read. I Like the dialogue and the grammar gets better as the writer progresses. For the first few chapters I was a bit worried, but it got much better. The MC is pretty funny and his somewhat awkward nature creates funny situations. Overall my only gripe was that the love interest was a beauty. I initially hoped she would be plain and then he makes her come out of her shell. That's ok though! Still a fun and easy read with enjoyable characters and situations. Good job!