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All in all i like this one. Its instesting starting settings, have flow in story telling. if only it have there where 2-3 more chapter then reviewing it as 3 or 3,5 wouldt be hard. as it is now there just not enough content do make better Judgement About It. As for Unique wording I would definitely Keep it as it is now. Its a Strength. and about thous writing mistake to quat my old english teacher "just keep writing and repeating, you will get the small things to right places in Time."