Review Detail of Arcanap in The Beguiling Guard.....Really?

Yep, Imma join the shameless authors and give myself a 5-star. But I know it's not truly the truth lol. I just need to give myself a booster. Please let me know if you see any grammatical errors or wrong sentences and I would correct them if I can....can I even do that after I've published it? I don't know but I'll try. Thanks for reading my novel!!