Review Detail of L1_a in I Am Able To Buy Anything
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Do not ignore the fact that I five starred my own novel. Hello people Any ideas you guys want to include just comment it here. I might pick it and put in the story, remember I said ”MIGHT”
I Am Able To Buy Anything
L1_a
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RandomWeirdDudeLv5RandomWeirdDude
I don't mean to be rude with this suggestion, but I do suggest that you use Grammarly. In the first chapter, you spell Ed's name as De 2 times, one of which isn't capitalized. You forget to pluralize words and forget commas as well, which would decrease in frequency if you were to use Grammarly. Also, your description doesn't match up with the actual events so you should change your summary too. Good Luck :)
