Review Detail of Nazarach in A Demon's Loyalty

It's a short story covering mysterious disappearances and the unraveling of a sisister plot. The writing itself is OK, focusing more on the point of view of one character, switching to the antagonist later on. The switch is a nice touch, getting the complementary information on the motives of the characters (and the main plot). Backdraw is that the writing and use of limited perspectives - with no introductory chapter or at least small narrative paragraphs - leaves the surroundings, all appearing characters, background and setting, seemingly rushed, empty of any descriptions and kinda unimaginative - even when choosing somewhat well known and common motives. The plot itself is rather common, the proceedings kinda gory (which is at least somewhat of a positive point regarding descriptive writing), and the ending is... very much open. I think this may be set in the supernatural-verse but even that is more of a guess than any founded on given information.