Review Detail of picklericks in Heavenly Dao Child

I’d really love to keep reading this novel, except I could not get past the first 4-5 sentences. This needs to be edited extremely bad. It’s almost unreadable Fhfjfjffjfjdksjfbxnxjdkdjdhrheitkxbdjfkdbdjdfjfjfjdjdbdksmdndkskfjdbskfixbsmfkzhdbfmslfjsbskfnxbdjdjdddddddjdfjhfksfjdhdksjfhfdjdjjdjdfjdhdkfjddhdjsjdjd