Review Detail of francom in Unlimited Fantasy

Writing quality: Not that bad considering it’s just a fanfic but there are a couple spelling errors and grammar mistake that take me out of the story while reading. Stability of updates: He has done a very good job with the updates and I noticed he did update at least once a day. Story Development: This is unfortunately where everything goes wrong. He starts off with the regular premise of having amnesia so he just uses that as an excuse to explain all the crazy things he can do. The other thing that bothered me was how the other characters interacted with the mc. Just a random kid goes into the fairytale guild and is just adopted immediately then when he shows that he has crazy strong magic and people start asking question about how he got that magic the only answer the mc can give them is “I don’t know” and everyone is like ok cool. And all that happened just a couple days after entering the guild. Sorry I just couldn’t keep reading after that. Character Design: He doesn’t go into great lengths as to fully describe how the mc looks but just describes himself to be incredibly handsome. World Background: I read until ch 10 and didn’t really get a sense of how big the world is or any clear descriptions of his surroundings. Overall: I first want to say that I really like the premise of an mc that is not just stuck in one world but has the ability to travel wherever he wishes including back to his original world. I just didn’t like how everything just sort of worked out for the mc without him having to really do anything. Even when he didn’t have enough points to buy an item from the system shop it was just handed to him, sure he had a time limit of paying back the points but I didn’t really like that everything the mc needed or wanted was just given to him without having to work for it. In the end this is a story for those who don’t really care how the mc becomes op but just starts out as op.