Review Detail of OmnipotentDad in Unlimited Fantasy
Review detail
Okay, first things first! Great novel, I like the idea of this novel as I can also relate to it, where the story is currently going is something I can feel extremely familiar with. Writing quality has some problems here and there, losing a few vowels and stuff, well some mixed words are there, but it is understandable, like from chapter 1: "Wait go where to some place where Cultivation exist or what?" Its a jumbled word or some sort, but it is tolerable, everything is great, just needs a few tinkering here and there, unlike mine which is full of shiits, 4 stars for this! Stability of updates: well, a little slow so I gave it 3 stars, but after it improves, maybe, I`ll change my review again. Story development, character design, world background, 5 stars, why? I like it, I find it extremely pleasing, seeing a work that is 60~80% going on a same path as mine, don't like it? fight me! Well, sincerely, from a doting Senpai XD
Unlimited Fantasy
Chenglei
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Earthshaker34:from the time i started reading your novel,i always wanted to ask you one thing,but for some reason i forgot to do it ! so here it goes! can you tell me who is that cute little adorable creature? :)
He must be talking about me. I guess he was a little shy to ask about me. I am TheGentlemenWorld and no, sorry, but I am not interested in guys. You can try Chenglei. He is pretty open.
Chenglei:Eh? What Cute Creature are you talking about?
TheGentlemenWorld:He must be talking about me. I guess he was a little shy to ask about me. I am TheGentlemenWorld and no, sorry, but I am not interested in guys. You can try Chenglei. He is pretty open.
Chenglei:Wtf?! Im so Confused? And bich what are you saying this daddy is into girls, fuk off
TheGentlemenWorld:WTF!? I said you were into guys! Don't assume the wrong thing!
Earthshaker34:from the time i started reading your novel,i always wanted to ask you one thing,but for some reason i forgot to do it ! so here it goes! can you tell me who is that cute little adorable creature? :)
yeah... I'm sure Chenglei bothered him alot before he put a review here. Kinda disgusting how much cheng licks his boot but whatever
Oniichan_Thickskin:DAD IS HERE?! ...wait I'm late by four days....
TheGentlemenWorld:yeah... I'm sure Chenglei bothered him alot before he put a review here. Kinda disgusting how much cheng licks his boot but whatever
You see, he put a 3.5 star on this novel, even though the review he gave was positive and cheng being the bootlick he is, treats it like it is a blessing from the heavens... not even a joke. I had to bother him to take it down...
Oniichan_Thickskin:DAD IS HERE?! ...wait I'm late by four days....
He is also into shotas and lolis... Don't worry tho. I called the FBI to keep a close watch on him so, your future kids are safe
Oniichan_Thickskin:...I never knew he had that kind of fetish for feets....
...lolicon and shotacon at the same time... good thing I just admired the youthfulness from afar, "Loli are holy being that you can only admire but not defile, her sweat is sweet and her poo is fragrant."
TheGentlemenWorld:He is also into shotas and lolis... Don't worry tho. I called the FBI to keep a close watch on him so, your future kids are safe
