Review Detail of Techno_MajicDragon in Ethereal Creator of Realms
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I both like and don’t like this story. Why? Well I’m not even going to talk about grammar, I’ll just say it’s... readable For the story itself well; there’s an actual plot but it keeps getting interrupted over and over by (in my opinion) useless plot lines. Share this thing happened in the world and it was probably important but it ultimately not interesting cause the entire time it cold have just Ben solved by the Mc, but instead he does nothing about it wastes about 4 - 8 chapter watching one dude fix a problem he could have do away with himself with a *snap* of his “fingers”.... anyway to not post a wall of text let me get to another point Story is relatively consistent, but I’ll add to that the MC is also relatively DUM wile silmuteniously being relatively an average JOE... By that I mean he causes problems he fixes 20 chapters later wen he finally stops smoking his godly primordial crack cocaine <- that was mostly a joke xD Overall story was good enough for me to enjoy in its entirety but in the end of as of now 64 chapter, the plot has not moved much beyond the MC creating a bunch of moons surrounding a planet, which took him more than 4 chapters for some ungodly reason! It was as if the author was trying to Make the story longer by describing everything that does not to be described making double spaces in between sentences/paragraphs so it wold make the chapters look longer. Hand in his “college assignment” and get extra credit for finishing earlier, hmmmmm.... it made me so mad and irritated just looking at the start of every sentence just saying : I create-etc. like can’t you do anything better... like I know this is probably translated but come on just that made me skip chapter after chapter..... there were another couple of things but they were minor errors and were fine for the most part.........
Ethereal Creator of Realms
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Lol sorry I kind of did this before falling asleep, but still the author should get an editor or something cause google translate alone is deriposumilousimbushes for a lack of a actual word to describe it...
Ethereal13:its not translated. lol.
if you didnt read past chapter 25 i can understand that. I didnt edit much before that becuase i started this series when i was sick for 7 weeks. Ive gone back and edited chapters 1-6 and the chapters after 25 are all edited. Once i have finished the first book i plan on editing the rest then put it on amazon.
Techno_MajicDragon:Lol sorry I kind of did this before falling asleep, but still the author should get an editor or something cause google translate alone is deriposumilousimbushes for a lack of a actual word to describe it...
I actually red the entire thing... so you cold say I was interested, but I did went in to a rant and I’m sorry about that. I just have my problems with it that I wanted to point out at the time and be realistic about, to the best of my abilities before I fell asleep... Also happy New Years.
Ethereal13:if you didnt read past chapter 25 i can understand that. I didnt edit much before that becuase i started this series when i was sick for 7 weeks. Ive gone back and edited chapters 1-6 and the chapters after 25 are all edited. Once i have finished the first book i plan on editing the rest then put it on amazon.
Techno_MajicDragon:I actually red the entire thing... so you cold say I was interested, but I did went in to a rant and I’m sorry about that. I just have my problems with it that I wanted to point out at the time and be realistic about, to the best of my abilities before I fell asleep... Also happy New Years.
Ok first,you can't say much about grammar because yours isnt one hundred percent either. Your not giving this story a chance! If you weren't being such an idiot than you would see that! You should give this story at least a four out of five because of how amazing this story is! There is a lot of potential in this story and your hate might turn the author off continuing this amazing story! So if your not going to give some constructive criticism then you can leave and go spread your hate somewhere else!
Did you even read anything before posting? I will admit my grammar sucks @$$ but But that does not mean I can’t criticize wen I se something’s wrong If you don’t like my criticism well to bad little glass flower, is not meant to hurt your feelings is meant to point out things I did not like and that the outdoor should take a look at and make changes if he/she dems it necessary for his/her vision. TLDR I’m not hating on the authors work, in fact I like it I just wished he/she put in a little bit more effort in to it...
Everything_Forever:Ok first,you can't say much about grammar because yours isnt one hundred percent either. Your not giving this story a chance! If you weren't being such an idiot than you would see that! You should give this story at least a four out of five because of how amazing this story is! There is a lot of potential in this story and your hate might turn the author off continuing this amazing story! So if your not going to give some constructive criticism then you can leave and go spread your hate somewhere else!
Techno_MajicDragon:Did you even read anything before posting? I will admit my grammar sucks @$$ but But that does not mean I can’t criticize wen I se something’s wrong If you don’t like my criticism well to bad little glass flower, is not meant to hurt your feelings is meant to point out things I did not like and that the outdoor should take a look at and make changes if he/she dems it necessary for his/her vision. TLDR I’m not hating on the authors work, in fact I like it I just wished he/she put in a little bit more effort in to it...