Too chessy in my opinion.... Some naruto fans as in the fans of the naruto character will love it.. You can say that he stick to the Origin Of course is a fanfic and all.... So u cant let the novel reader judge it, go to the site that is meant for if you want people who want to read a geniun fanfic not fanfic novel
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