Review Detail of DeJeL in Strangers From Another World

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: A spelling//grammar mistake or two spotted (check comments)... Also, I don't know what, but it feels like something is missing... maybe it's because I have not read enough yet? Positive Feedback: It flows very well, looks like while you were writing and not on hiatus you had a good update rate, good plot, character, and world development thus far.;,;. and none of your world background sounds like a ****** information dump. Personal Feedback: I really enjoyed this novel thus far, I will keep it in my library to continue reading at a later date.;,;.