Review Detail of InfiniteBookWyrm in The Lord’s Empire

The story is initially intriguing, and no flaws were particularly obvious for at least 50 chapters or so. After that... well maybe the author had a sufficient following and got careless? There are a number of instances that are tiresome but bearable; the almost obligatory "China #1" plugs, frequent contradictions in his descriptions of incidental motivations or consequences, the logical flaw in "completely conquered people are more loyal than allies" (until they believe they have a chance at rebelling, obviously). What finally made me drop the book was the unfortunately common theme of "strong willed MC turns into putty in front of (in this case random) pretty women", which to me just speaks of shoddy character design. Clearly the story is popular enough, but for the readers who want a consistent and cohesive narrative, I don't recommend.