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DeathIsntParadise
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Writing qualify doesn't need to be mentioned much it is standard webnovel quality not on the level of professional writer but a hobbiest. Updating stability doesn't need to be mentioned it's finished. Story development it pretty awful the mc just happens to chance upon certain encounters and when you the mc finds someone you can immediately guess what they will get from them I can see the authors thought process which is usually a good thing but is bad in this case as I can see the author going "Hey, this is a good idea let's do that than proceeding to scrap it and leave it in the story. Character design is even worse with the mc carrying the classic webnovel sexist viewpoint of if there is a pretty woman she must join my harem or die I only got to chapter 70 where the mc extorts a woman to be his partner then proceeds to molest her. Worldbackground doesn't have a lot of thought put into it as although it has a good framework the author doesn't have the patience to fill it out or stick to it thus making the frame useless. Overall review - I would heavily discourage reading this the only affect you will get from reading this is not enjoyment (Unless you're into the blackmail **** genre) but rather a waste of time and emotions. Usually in novels like this the world seems to work in a way that his nonconseual actions are right and just but this could just be me being ignorant but I don't have that vibe at all it feels like the mc is proud to be a sexist, advocate of nonconsensual stuff. Thank you for reading I hope you can take this review and reflect on whether or not you want to read it. Side note: I kinda got tricked since although there were kinda gradual signs in the first 40 chapters it wasn't so overtly obvious as it was after the 40 chapters so if you do want to read this please read chapter 70 and if you like it feel free to enjoy!

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Oop sorry I didn't mean chapter 70 I meant 94 I have no idea where I got 70 from.