Review Detail of DarkStarSword in NPC Website

just read the first prologue. I liked the whole concept of the story and I already got hooked in first read so I added it to my collection 🥰.So Here's my suggestion. I'm a person who likes feeling the ambience of a scene so I would recommend to incorporate a detailed or just a brief description of where, when, and what is the setting of the whole scene just to emphasize the vibe it embodies whether it is calm, chaotic, or whatever. but put a little grain of salt on this cause Im just starting to write novels so, yeah 🥴😆