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ADRENalin
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To be honest or to honest this story should just be rewritten. After the so called 50 sh*** chapters i just continued on even after your sick joke of rape (may or not be your fetish. no offense author-san) and the whole harem thing is just a lost cause(makes the mc seem that he is thinking with his d***) you tried to improve more than once on this story(love the dark plot at the start) but then again you tried to make it a comedy(fu**** lame) and how you gave mc a useless innate power at the begginig was just shi*** so please (me on my knees begging) rewrite this story, it has an amaizing plot that you can show us only in a rewrite. Even if it is wrong don't listen to the good reviews or your so called loyal readers (i was one of them) but they may either drop you or just give you some nice comments to just drag you down (no major offense, tho i don't care lol) so author-san if you read this please think about how well you want the novel to go.(Good luck author-san👍)

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Kael Cor: A Vampire's Awakening

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Yo can you please tell me the physical body of mc? I know author described him as a dark skinned but what about his hair eyes colour facial? I'm at 22 btw