Review Detail of 85jack in THE KING OF THE UNIVERSE

a lot of things are cliché but I still really liked it, it's has a flow to the story so I could still appreciate it as I read not to strong or definite on how things work in this universe but still understandable, what gets me is the concept of age and how the mc matures is crazy (to me and is a killer for the story) my only example is being old or knowing a lot doesn't mean much unless you experience or understand something gaining powers should be easy in most universe like this one because of the variable of magic/will or what note( it's fantasy but I'll always think most people under 20 are mostly retarded even me once)