I liked the concept of the story, but the Main character is telling every tom dick and harry about his power, I couldnt take it anymore, it supposedly a big secrets and they have an assassination organization after them known for intelligence. Anyone could be a spy, even friends. But thats my take its still a good read give it a try.
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LIKEThanks for the reply...Let ne clarify one thing first.. Arjun is the Will of the universe... So all the life forms who draws power from him will have their mind connected with him. No matter how much they try, they can't hide any of their secrets from Arjun.. Arjun revealed his secret only to those people who got their will changed by him.. So if there really exist a spy among them... They can't hide it from Arjun at all.. As the will of the universe he can kill all the life forms who draws power from him with just his thoughts... So the things will be spy proof... That's why Arjun revealed his secrets to some of the people