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No_Name_Passerby
No_Name_PasserbyLv135yrNo_Name_Passerby

Everything is good and I enjoyed every turn of the story... The only thing that is bothering me is..... although this would make me look bad, and also needy, and a (little bit?) Perfectionist.... correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the right spelling for "Devine" actually "Divine"..... Really I don't mean to be offensive or perfectionistic, I just thought you should edit it since its always been being mentioned every time you talks about cores.... But all in all... I really enjoys the story... keep it up and please don't drop it....

altalt

THE KING OF THE UNIVERSE

VKSS1602

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VKSS1602
VKSS1602AuthorVKSS1602

Thanks for the review. Ill correct it. As I stated in first chapter that my English is ordinary. I'm an Indian. Here people speak less English. so i really suck at high level English.... Anyway thanks for the review. I'll correct it

5yr
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No_Name_Passerby
No_Name_PasserbyLv13No_Name_Passerby

Its cool! No one is perfect anyways...

VKSS1602:Thanks for the review. Ill correct it. As I stated in first chapter that my English is ordinary. I'm an Indian. Here people speak less English. so i really suck at high level English.... Anyway thanks for the review. I'll correct it
5yr
1
VKSS1602
VKSS1602AuthorVKSS1602

thanks for your understanding... I'm looking for an editor. So wait patiently

No_Name_Passerby:Its cool! No one is perfect anyways...
5yr
Dustypirate009
Dustypirate009Lv5Dustypirate009

Except someone *coughs.. *

No_Name_Passerby:Its cool! No one is perfect anyways...
5yr
Magnowa
MagnowaLv6Magnowa

Cell

Dustypirate009:Except someone *coughs.. *
4yr
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