Hi All. I'm the author of this novel. This is one of my first works as a writer! I hope you do enjoy and please feel free to comment below or on a chapter. I will try to respond when I can! Also feel free to join us on discord. We don't bite sometimes. https://discord.gg/Ap9KZkQ
Cddizzym
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LIKEI remade the review to add some extra stuff. So I'm not surprised. Kinda urks me that the first review is nonsense though :P!
MWhitestone:İts so sad that your review of your own novel is the secınd one
The idea is good and I'm looking forward to more. However it is a bit hard to read. It seems like it was written as a draft of just the main ideas. It needs a bit of detailing for example the tense. Using the wrong tense mattress it difficult to read. I like the idea and look forward to seeing you develop
Thanks Nicky. I'm still a novice writer and I'm still trying to improve myself day after day. I will be looking at an editor down the line to help me improve as well. I've got a few fans who are helping me on discord as well. Thanks for letting me know!
Lil_Nicky49:The idea is good and I'm looking forward to more. However it is a bit hard to read. It seems like it was written as a draft of just the main ideas. It needs a bit of detailing for example the tense. Using the wrong tense mattress it difficult to read. I like the idea and look forward to seeing you develop
You're welcome I just didn't want you to feel underappreciated. Because it's really good. And I comment because I have high expectations for you. Good luck.
Cddizzym:Thanks Nicky. I'm still a novice writer and I'm still trying to improve myself day after day. I will be looking at an editor down the line to help me improve as well. I've got a few fans who are helping me on discord as well. Thanks for letting me know!
void893:Interesting to see how you start with a more western setting for your novels compared to the eastern stuff floating on here.
He seems to have done it to a few more novels. However I get what you mean I too would be slightly irritated.
Cddizzym:I remade the review to add some extra stuff. So I'm not surprised. Kinda urks me that the first review is nonsense though :P!
Cddizzym:I remade the review to add some extra stuff. So I'm not surprised. Kinda urks me that the first review is nonsense though :P!
Lil_Nicky49:The idea is good and I'm looking forward to more. However it is a bit hard to read. It seems like it was written as a draft of just the main ideas. It needs a bit of detailing for example the tense. Using the wrong tense mattress it difficult to read. I like the idea and look forward to seeing you develop