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Cddizzym
CddizzymAuthor5yrCddizzym

Hi All. I'm the author of this novel. This is one of my first works as a writer! I hope you do enjoy and please feel free to comment below or on a chapter. I will try to respond when I can! Also feel free to join us on discord. We don't bite sometimes. https://discord.gg/Ap9KZkQ

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God is a Game Designer

Cddizzym

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LuciferBloodfallen
LuciferBloodfallenLv2LuciferBloodfallen

I really loved this book hope u write more here u go I will give u a ps from me. hope u become active again.

TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15TigerBlooImmortal

Will there be romance(harem)?

MWhitestone
MWhitestoneLv6MWhitestone

İts so sad that your review of your own novel is the secınd one

Cddizzym
CddizzymAuthorCddizzym

I remade the review to add some extra stuff. So I'm not surprised. Kinda urks me that the first review is nonsense though :P!

MWhitestone:İts so sad that your review of your own novel is the secınd one
Zackking
ZackkingLv14Zackking

Gogogogogog keep up the good work and i hope 10 chapter per a weeks will be nice :)

Lil_Nicky49
Lil_Nicky49Lv13Lil_Nicky49

The idea is good and I'm looking forward to more. However it is a bit hard to read. It seems like it was written as a draft of just the main ideas. It needs a bit of detailing for example the tense. Using the wrong tense mattress it difficult to read. I like the idea and look forward to seeing you develop

Cddizzym
CddizzymAuthorCddizzym

Thanks Nicky. I'm still a novice writer and I'm still trying to improve myself day after day. I will be looking at an editor down the line to help me improve as well. I've got a few fans who are helping me on discord as well. Thanks for letting me know!

Lil_Nicky49:The idea is good and I'm looking forward to more. However it is a bit hard to read. It seems like it was written as a draft of just the main ideas. It needs a bit of detailing for example the tense. Using the wrong tense mattress it difficult to read. I like the idea and look forward to seeing you develop
Lil_Nicky49
Lil_Nicky49Lv13Lil_Nicky49

You're welcome I just didn't want you to feel underappreciated. Because it's really good. And I comment because I have high expectations for you. Good luck.

Cddizzym:Thanks Nicky. I'm still a novice writer and I'm still trying to improve myself day after day. I will be looking at an editor down the line to help me improve as well. I've got a few fans who are helping me on discord as well. Thanks for letting me know!
Wolfsbain
WolfsbainLv14Wolfsbain

Love how this started and is developing, moving along its very good. Just stumbled across this and ending up reading it in a night, now I'm waiting for more lol cant wait keep it up.

Reven501
Reven501Lv5Reven501

I love your story so far, and am now eagerly awaiting each update. Will be looking forward to anything you do in the future.

LandUpGaming
LandUpGamingLv5LandUpGaming

I dunno I may bite occasionally

void893
void893Lv11void893

Interesting to see how you start with a more western setting for your novels compared to the eastern stuff floating on here.

void893
void893Lv11void893

Though that’s simply based on a glance.. However I intend on reading this one 😋

void893:Interesting to see how you start with a more western setting for your novels compared to the eastern stuff floating on here.
void893
void893Lv11void893

He seems to have done it to a few more novels. However I get what you mean I too would be slightly irritated.

Cddizzym:I remade the review to add some extra stuff. So I'm not surprised. Kinda urks me that the first review is nonsense though :P!
kamehgahskiida
kamehgahskiidaLv11kamehgahskiida

Give some tags , some reader only reads if the genre/tags they want is present to the story

Kirora
KiroraLv5Kirora

Is this good? Can you give me a basic outline of what the MC... is doing...? Please?

Cddizzym:I remade the review to add some extra stuff. So I'm not surprised. Kinda urks me that the first review is nonsense though :P!
Fiend
FiendLv15Fiend

This a a manga doesn't it?

Markoico
MarkoicoLv5Markoico

Just read the comments and it seems to be a good novel, later I'll come back with more details .

Sidrex
SidrexLv4Sidrex

Hey, why dont you spice the story up a bit ???

elyn01
elyn01Lv5elyn01

You actually have an interesting plot. I rarely read novels with "MC has a system" theme but this one pique my interest and added this novel in my library. Keep up the good work. Your awesome. :)

sacredyeti
sacredyetiLv15sacredyeti

Stop its perfect how it's going now I love it dont try to fix what's not broken

Lil_Nicky49:The idea is good and I'm looking forward to more. However it is a bit hard to read. It seems like it was written as a draft of just the main ideas. It needs a bit of detailing for example the tense. Using the wrong tense mattress it difficult to read. I like the idea and look forward to seeing you develop