Review Detail of Trollaxe_Underbrew in Divine Emperor of Death
Review detail
If you came for action or adventure, you'll find only frail and limp wristed attempts at the pretense of it. Comes off as some kind of outlet for the repressed desires of the author to have a loving family and has some vague undertones of CP, considering the protagonist is the soul of a 30 year old man in the body of a toddler(a child later on) and has attraction and/or urges towards his 'peers'. Overall I'd say its interesting and has potential but requires more substance and less discovery writing.
Divine Emperor of Death
Stardust_Breaker
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Stardust_Breaker:Sorry to disappoint you, I already have a loving family. What's CP though?
Woah, that's plain abuse and insult. The MC doesn't even touch Ellia in that way, and while he was living as a child, he mostly needed to act like a child, but that in time caused him to become a child. The more you act, the more you become what you act. (P.s, there's even a past of him where he saves a child on earth. I didn't see him be a CP at that time? Hmm?) I should totally delete this review for ignorance and false allegations
Ideal:Child pred?
Ideal:It’s fine didn’t really read story. Tell me what u think about it, if your still following
I'm the author and my opinion regarding my own story is something I can't brag about... All I can tell is that I'm proud of how measly my writing was in the past when compared to now. I've certainly improved and as for they story, it's up to the readers to rate it, although personally, I feel that I'm doing good, I guess....
Ideal:The atory