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Trollaxe_Underbrew
Trollaxe_UnderbrewLv134yrTrollaxe_Underbrew

If you came for action or adventure, you'll find only frail and limp wristed attempts at the pretense of it. Comes off as some kind of outlet for the repressed desires of the author to have a loving family and has some vague undertones of CP, considering the protagonist is the soul of a 30 year old man in the body of a toddler(a child later on) and has attraction and/or urges towards his 'peers'. Overall I'd say its interesting and has potential but requires more substance and less discovery writing.

Divine Emperor of Death

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Stardust_Breaker
Stardust_BreakerAuthorStardust_Breaker

Sorry to disappoint you, I already have a loving family. What's CP though?

Ideal
IdealLv6Ideal

Child pred?

Stardust_Breaker:Sorry to disappoint you, I already have a loving family. What's CP though?
Stardust_Breaker
Stardust_BreakerAuthorStardust_Breaker

Woah, that's plain abuse and insult. The MC doesn't even touch Ellia in that way, and while he was living as a child, he mostly needed to act like a child, but that in time caused him to become a child. The more you act, the more you become what you act. (P.s, there's even a past of him where he saves a child on earth. I didn't see him be a CP at that time? Hmm?) I should totally delete this review for ignorance and false allegations

Ideal:Child pred?
Stardust_Breaker
Stardust_BreakerAuthorStardust_Breaker

Oh sorry, I accidentally responded to you

Ideal:Child pred?
Ideal
IdealLv6Ideal

It’s fine didn’t really read story. Tell me what u think about it, if your still following

Stardust_Breaker:Oh sorry, I accidentally responded to you
Stardust_Breaker
Stardust_BreakerAuthorStardust_Breaker

Think about what?

Ideal:It’s fine didn’t really read story. Tell me what u think about it, if your still following
Ideal
IdealLv6Ideal

The atory

Stardust_Breaker:Think about what?
Stardust_Breaker
Stardust_BreakerAuthorStardust_Breaker

I'm the author and my opinion regarding my own story is something I can't brag about... All I can tell is that I'm proud of how measly my writing was in the past when compared to now. I've certainly improved and as for they story, it's up to the readers to rate it, although personally, I feel that I'm doing good, I guess....

Ideal:The atory