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jaevi
jaeviLv24yrjaevi

I like the novel very much except quite a few things. The cliché past was alright for me since it's quite normal that authors like to copy. But the way he introduced it wasn't even normal. Seriously, he was tortured and yet look at his attitude. He's like that guy who has doo-gooder and hero complex. And I bet that the author didn't even research properly about royalty. Sharing a national secret technique that was only accessable to the royal family to a maid just because she was talented? I'm not saying it was wrong but the author showed that he was tortured for years and someone tortured brutally cannot have that attitude. They either distance themselves from others or traumatized. And I don't wanna hear that author logic that every author I criticize tells me about how it's because of his experience or because he's a good guy or because he has a great mentality. Anyways, I don't mind anything else besides the MC's attitude, the maid, the stupid parent moments in the beginning of the novel that makes people uncmmfortable and not enjoyable to read at all. The point of making novels is so that the reader could enjoy it and having parents of the MC make out in front of him is not enjoyable at all unless you plan on making a MILF novel. I know I haven't read the whole thing cause I'm still at like chapter 40 and because I'm a chapter stacker kind of guy. Author, hopefully you don't get offended by my criticizing because I only wanna read what's best. I'm sure that beyond chapter 40 is good but I seriously don't like it when they help their friends become stronger and overdoes it just to make sure they always stay by their side. Please remember, criticizes don't degrade the novel, it just points out what the readers problem with the novel are.

Divine Emperor of Death

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Stardust_Breaker
Stardust_BreakerAuthorStardust_Breaker

Alright, I'm sorry that you don't like this and the way you said it, being mushy and sticking close with friends, family is clearly not your thing. I wanted to make a cultivation novel the MC keeps his loved ones close and not leave them behind like almost every Chinese cultivation novel does... Btw, thanks for reading at least 40 chapters before reviewing, appreciate it!

Stardust_Breaker
Stardust_BreakerAuthorStardust_Breaker

Alright, I'm sorry that you don't like this and the way you said it, being mushy and sticking close with friends, family is clearly not your thing. I wanted to make a cultivation novel the MC keeps his loved ones close and not leave them behind like almost every Chinese cultivation novel does... Btw, thanks for reading at least 40 chapters before reviewing, appreciate it!

Vladarius
VladariusLv5Vladarius

bro pls, at least put some space between the sentences to make some paragraph, this is hella huge of a info dump. hurts to read.