Review Detail of EveningSong in Divine Emperor of Death
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Tl:dr B- edging into a B. Better then most but still rough around the edges. This is a solid twist on the standard reincarnation cultivation novel. The author's writing is getting better and just about everything from a narrative perspective works just fine. With that said there are some areas which need improvement. The characters and world building are not detailed enough to feel, well... real. The plot moves rather quickly and not enough time is spent to genuinely get to know the characters which are so pivotal to the story. I appreciate that the author isn't padding the word count but more fine details would make the characters stand out from the background. All in all it's a good first novel from this author so expect some rough edges. I recommend that you give this novel a shot and see what happens; it's better then 85% of the stuff out there.
Divine Emperor of Death
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Thanks for the reply and your active engagement with your readers. Your novel is a bit rough but still a joy to read. I look forward to your future efforts. Cheers.
Stardust_Breaker:You're right, I must concentrate on more details. Thanks for your review, will be a great help to my writing.
Great novel. In start it's like a silly novel because I think its author's first novel. But after 500, story build up well. After 1200+, story will get better, and it led readers to curious about what happen next. Some misunderstanding happens (like you will get wrong ideas for some scenarios) if you read around 300 or little less chapters because you will think it's just an OP or something not right to read because it's silly novel. But just trust and read at least 1500+ chapters and you will find those early worries not necessary and lot of OP(like death note) will come up with lot of restrictions. (Those are figured in novel by MC) Novel gets very interesting and now its lot more with cliffhangers (I'm at 2513). Also, author discount (99%) lowest tire privileged chapter for just for 1 coin. For unlock lowest tire 1 coin, each chapter also 1 coin (99% discount) Include 5 chapters for that tire. Also join his discord channel there you can clarify about your doubts about some chapters, if you feel novel will get wrong direction or not right in your sense. because author like to mislead readers (like teasing) and write entirely different stories. Also, author like to hang the reader's lot of cliffhangers. So, if you think it's not right to read story because you think it wrong like something happen, then you can ask it on discord spoiler channel and clarify what will happen next by fellow readers and continue to read.