Review Detail of liontrappedincave in stopped

I really loved your old version and feel that you've done really well balancing his love life but maybe you should keep track of them and write down their personalities as sometimes I feel they are being skipped over or try to lower the numbers. Another point of the book I am dissatisfied is that thier should be twists in the story like how maybe chorus falls in love with mc(this is not spoiler). Generally I also feel you should focus more on the characters personalities and depths than the battle scenes. Your subsystem idea with their own personalities is a really good idea and I hope he gathers a bunch of subsystems&system. The systems are more fleshed out than the female leads in my opinion and also could the first wife have a different system pretty plz😊😝. I HOPE THAT YOU READ THIS SINCE I SPENT A LOT OF MY TIME WRITING THIS REVIEW. . . SUPPORT TO AUTHOR YOUVE DONE REALLY WELL