Review Detail of Moongloww in Genius Seventh Prince

This story is honestly a bit of a gem. Fun characters and humorous moments. If there was one major problem with this story, it would be the lack of consistency for updates. we are often left on end for days or weeks at a time, waiting for a new chapter, which is usually a single update before the author disappears again. However, if you are willing to be patient, then the writing quality of the chapters more then make up for it. the reason why I can not give character development 5 stars either is because there are many times where charcters essentially disappear completely, even when they looked to be of some importance. The main character also seems to have some inconsistency of mana control. He often runs out well before other charcters, even if they are at the same or similar level as him. Whether this is for tention in the story, or just a lack on inconsistency on the authors part, I don't know. What I can say though, is if you look past those two things, over all the character development is honestly pretty good. We get to see the main character grow and change through out the story, as well as a few other characters. As for story development, I cant give that a full five stars either, because similar to the character disappearing situation, we also get some pottentially important plot elements that also seem to disappear completely, with the characters not even mentioning them after the fact, even when it appeared that for a few chapters atleast it was going to be an important element to the story. however, again, this is a relatively minor problem, because the rest of the plot and story development is almost spot on if you ignore those minor inconsistencies.