As of chapter 70: If you are looking for a novel fantasy romance with some magic/cultivation type elements, this story is likely for you. Overall, the writing is good and the pace is steady. The romance is a slow burn and it is still unclear who the ML is, but there are definitely romantic elements throughout. Apart from typical grammar, syntax, and wrong words found in translations, my one real gripe is that the author has a bad habit of writing “ah” in almost every chapter, with almost every character, multiple times in a paragraph. By excessive, I mean one sentence alone will use that expression 2+ times, and then the following sentence be used again bu a different character, until every charcter seems to have this verbal tick. The excessive use becomes distracting and somewhat irriating after a while; however, overlooking that, the plot and rest of the writing is decent enough to continue.
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