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2someawsome
2someawsomeAuthor5yr2someawsome

Hello all. I have been a vivid reader of webnovels for a long time. After reading so many fantasy novels, I always wanted to write one of my own. So this is my first try. I know the chapters are small. Trust me they felt longer when I initially wrote them. I will work on the length. Looking for honest reviews.

True Space Mage

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killercoolie
killercoolieLv15killercoolie

Any chase of this story continuing??

Dukeon
DukeonLv14Dukeon

How many chapters a week

2someawsome
2someawsomeAuthor2someawsome

I havent got an exact schedule. But a minimum of 5-7.

Dukeon:How many chapters a week
PeacefulUser
PeacefulUserLv5PeacefulUser

Your story is very good, I hope to continue to accompany you in the development of the story.

TheOGDuanChen
TheOGDuanChenLv5TheOGDuanChen

To be honest I’m bored of the mc since there’s barely any interaction with other characters and when he does interact he’s incredibly bland to me I would love it if you just spice up the main characters relationships the rest of the story is fine Would also like to understand power levels

2someawsome
2someawsomeAuthor2someawsome

The MC is supposed to be older mentally. So he avoids talking with kids similar to his age. As for other characters, I will try to make it better. Its still a learning process for me. First time author. ;)

WorldTree
WorldTreeLv5WorldTree

is there any romance in the story or not .. i Hope there is not .. but before i starts reading i want to know ..

2someawsome
2someawsomeAuthor2someawsome

There isnt till now. Even if there is in the future, it wont be dragged on or play too much of a part in the story.

WorldTree:is there any romance in the story or not .. i Hope there is not .. but before i starts reading i want to know ..
Netherworld
NetherworldLv15Netherworld

Your doing a good job, no worries the novel has potential and the way of your writing is good. Just hope if the Mage levels are more clarified. No worries I’m committing to use my power stone everyday on this.novel

2someawsome:The MC is supposed to be older mentally. So he avoids talking with kids similar to his age. As for other characters, I will try to make it better. Its still a learning process for me. First time author. ;)
2someawsome
2someawsomeAuthor2someawsome

I heard others mention about power level as well. I initially thought of not going with a power level system. More like each mage having their own way of using magic so that they could not be compared with each other. But I see how that can be problematic. I will try and incorporate a power level system. I welcome anymore Ideas you guys have for the stoey

Bijuu09
Bijuu09Lv4Bijuu09

Thx

Kirora
KiroraLv5Kirora

No OP... hmm 🤔

byakoojjang
byakoojjangLv13byakoojjang

Can you have more chapter. Like 14 chapter/week?

2someawsome
2someawsomeAuthor2someawsome

I am trying to write as much as I can. I am newly married and have full time job. Finding the time to write isn't as easy I expected.

byakoojjang:Can you have more chapter. Like 14 chapter/week?
byakoojjang
byakoojjangLv13byakoojjang

Ahh. So that's the case. It's alright then family dan work must come first. But your story is really good. Congrat for you marriage hope Jr is coming soon.

2someawsome:I am trying to write as much as I can. I am newly married and have full time job. Finding the time to write isn't as easy I expected.
Rici
RiciLv5Rici

🖒 thanks

Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13Lonely_citizen

Congrats

2someawsome:I am trying to write as much as I can. I am newly married and have full time job. Finding the time to write isn't as easy I expected.
nemery11
nemery11Lv6nemery11

Why not try putting titles for chapters?

Bahlol
BahlolLv14Bahlol

yes titles please. it makes easy for the readers to follow the story and recall information or details about things that happened in previous chapters

nemery11:Why not try putting titles for chapters?
2someawsome
2someawsomeAuthor2someawsome

I thought about it. But by then I had already published a lot of chapters. I didnt know if starting to give titles would look good enough in the middle of a book.

nemery11:Why not try putting titles for chapters?
nemery11
nemery11Lv6nemery11

Then ask the people that already read the chapter to suggest a title for the all chapter but the new ones you will be the naming *just a suggestion*😃

2someawsome:I thought about it. But by then I had already published a lot of chapters. I didnt know if starting to give titles would look good enough in the middle of a book.