Hello all. I have been a vivid reader of webnovels for a long time. After reading so many fantasy novels, I always wanted to write one of my own. So this is my first try. I know the chapters are small. Trust me they felt longer when I initially wrote them. I will work on the length. Looking for honest reviews.
2someawsome
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LIKEThere isnt till now. Even if there is in the future, it wont be dragged on or play too much of a part in the story.
WorldTree:is there any romance in the story or not .. i Hope there is not .. but before i starts reading i want to know ..
Your doing a good job, no worries the novel has potential and the way of your writing is good. Just hope if the Mage levels are more clarified. No worries I’m committing to use my power stone everyday on this.novel
2someawsome:The MC is supposed to be older mentally. So he avoids talking with kids similar to his age. As for other characters, I will try to make it better. Its still a learning process for me. First time author. ;)
I heard others mention about power level as well. I initially thought of not going with a power level system. More like each mage having their own way of using magic so that they could not be compared with each other. But I see how that can be problematic. I will try and incorporate a power level system. I welcome anymore Ideas you guys have for the stoey
I am trying to write as much as I can. I am newly married and have full time job. Finding the time to write isn't as easy I expected.
byakoojjang:Can you have more chapter. Like 14 chapter/week?
Ahh. So that's the case. It's alright then family dan work must come first. But your story is really good. Congrat for you marriage hope Jr is coming soon.
2someawsome:I am trying to write as much as I can. I am newly married and have full time job. Finding the time to write isn't as easy I expected.
2someawsome:I am trying to write as much as I can. I am newly married and have full time job. Finding the time to write isn't as easy I expected.
yes titles please. it makes easy for the readers to follow the story and recall information or details about things that happened in previous chapters
nemery11:Why not try putting titles for chapters?
I thought about it. But by then I had already published a lot of chapters. I didnt know if starting to give titles would look good enough in the middle of a book.
nemery11:Why not try putting titles for chapters?
Then ask the people that already read the chapter to suggest a title for the all chapter but the new ones you will be the naming *just a suggestion*😃
2someawsome:I thought about it. But by then I had already published a lot of chapters. I didnt know if starting to give titles would look good enough in the middle of a book.