Review Detail of IjustWanaRead in Warlord System - RTW FanFiction

Item: Warlord System - RTW FanFiction
Rating: 4

Review detail

IjustWanaReadLv65yrIjustWanaRead

Story looks promising, writhing is good but i feel that your chapter size is to short and i don`t get the satisfaction i do when reading other novel chapters. And if characters main source of of SP points is killing his enemies then unless he does some non-killing missions in the beginning then i fear his fat behind will die as soon as he sets a foot on the battleground. So i believe it`s better for you if you try and change the SP point acquisition unless you plan to make the main character a mass murderer. Good luck and best wishes from me.

Warlord System - RTW FanFiction

MasterGalius

Liked it!

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STRONG_ASS_GUYLv4STRONG_ASS_GUY

you read 0 chapters, FUCK BOTS ARE EVERYWHERE! THEY ARE TAKING OVER, WHAT IS THAT? "IT'S A BIRD" a retard guy said, "IT'S A PLANE" a more retarded person said, "NO... IT'S SPIDER MAN VERSION 2, WHO IS KNOWN BY THE NAME SUPERMAN!" a less retarded peoson said

5yr

IjustWanaReadLv6IjustWanaRead

for your info I read all 4 chapters before i joined here so sorry if i rubbed you the wrong way but i still stand behind what i wrote about this novel. But if you believe that I am a bot fell free to report me. Have a nice day

5yr

IjustWanaReadLv6IjustWanaRead

oh and with chapter 5 he disappointed me so i don`t recommend this novel to anyone it`s waste of time

IjustWanaRead:for your info I read all 4 chapters before i joined here so sorry if i rubbed you the wrong way but i still stand behind what i wrote about this novel. But if you believe that I am a bot fell free to report me. Have a nice day

5yr