i dont if i would continue to read this or drop it right now. hey author isnt the same plot and story you made from the past? i can see it redundant. how can the mc so fucking evil. he accepted it easly? he asked his father to commit suicide, yes he hate him by the way his living his life but he his still his father and there should be bit hesitation or barrier before accepting the quest. you remove the cultivation part which is good but i cant really see the difference between this and the previous story. it was still dark. unrealistic. anyway dont be offended just stating my idead. thanks
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LIKEyoure right but, if you're a sane person you wont do that easily without bit of hesistation. blood is thicker than water. this one and the previous plot are the same, i thought you made him sane person but he was still in his way to becoming a psychopath. he was litteraly crazt or i should say you didnt change that much. btw im dropping your novel so good luck.
Gyihhuhu_:You don't understand. The evil problem is related to his backstory. You haven't even seen it yet, so how can you know that his behavior isn't justified?
ColdHeavens:youre right but, if you're a sane person you wont do that easily without bit of hesistation. blood is thicker than water. this one and the previous plot are the same, i thought you made him sane person but he was still in his way to becoming a psychopath. he was litteraly crazt or i should say you didnt change that much. btw im dropping your novel so good luck.