Review Detail of Tehizz in I Shall Tame the Heavens!

Okay, first off the overall story of this novel is great, the way author develops each character is good also. But, not everything is perfect, I've spotted a couple of grammar mistakes as 'i' is supposed to be written as 'I' and 'i'm' is supposed to be written as 'I'm'. Other than a couple more grammar mistakes the story development is good also, I would recommend anyone to give this novel a try.