Review Detail of Everything_Forever in The Daily Grind.

Liked the whole office dungeon thing and the MC was ok but then it started getting bad when the MC told his roommate about the dungeon instead of keeping it a secret. I thought that totally ruined the novel for me but I stayed because I was hoping the author would fix it somehow but I was wrong, instead the author was going to add even more people! All in all,the author ruined a really cool idea because "teamwork makes the dream work!" The author was an idiot that destroyed these story a couple chapters in.