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MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthor5yrMellowGuy

Will be doing a serious review here. No spoilers. Okay, so what do we have here? A typical system novel? I don't think so. We have Jonah, a righteous mc that helps other. However, he is almost murdered. He then gains the Hero System from the future, starting his journey into an unknown world. Even though I'm the author, I must admit that this novel has a lot of potential. Cultivators... Two worlds... Disaster... System... Mission... I mean, damn, how did I even think of such an awesome novel? I always wonder. So here is what you'll get if you read this. 1. A reasonable MC. 2. A developing System (not overpowered) 3. Cultivators in a modern world. 4. Fantasy world. 5. Two bros in a foreign world. 6. Mc with a clear goal. 7. Side-characters with their own thoughts and feelings. 8. A bit of heroism philosophy. 9. And lastly, lots and lots of fun, thrill, and enjoyment. There are other exciting elements but that would just spoil it. At the very least, these are my goals for this novel. So... what are you waiting for?

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The Hero System

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superb_gamer
superb_gamerLv2superb_gamer

romance or harem???

Shantanu
ShantanuLv4Shantanu

Chapters, chapters and more chapters~ :D

MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthorMellowGuy

Votes, votes and more votes! Haha

Shantanu:Chapters, chapters and more chapters~ :D
Darkdelusion
DarkdelusionLv6Darkdelusion

Romance/harem/none?

MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthorMellowGuy

There will be romance later on.

Darkdelusion:Romance/harem/none?
Kirora
KiroraLv5Kirora

I don’t know... hmm 🤔

Thatch
ThatchLv10Thatch

Your overpraising your own work

MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthorMellowGuy

Hmm? I think that I've said these are my goals... How did that turn to be overpraising?

Thatch:Your overpraising your own work
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6CliffkunLolRekt

is there a harem

TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10TheGentlemenWorld

Some casual narcissism there. Lol

necrosis
necrosisLv5necrosis

More more mor ... give more

MoonChasingSun
MoonChasingSunLv5MoonChasingSun

You got skills bro But I don't think anyone likes a mc who gets his as.s f.ucked by a villain repeatedly just because he is to good .... Not a novel I would like If want this heroism I can watch in any anime it is full of this crap

MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthorMellowGuy

How many chapters have you read?

MoonChasingSun:You got skills bro But I don't think anyone likes a mc who gets his as.s f.ucked by a villain repeatedly just because he is to good .... Not a novel I would like If want this heroism I can watch in any anime it is full of this crap
MoonChasingSun
MoonChasingSunLv5MoonChasingSun

32 chapters

MellowGuy:How many chapters have you read?
MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthorMellowGuy

If you read the next chapters, then you must’ve realized that Jonah wouldn’t be a hero who would forgive others just because he's good. Rather, he would be a just punishing those who cross him and others. Hope uo enjoy this novel.

MoonChasingSun:32 chapters
Mortifer
MortiferLv13Mortifer

You lost me at the 2nd point. Was hoping for epic OPness

HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5HansTheCool

Good sir, does the system get op though, It will be great if I does!

MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthorMellowGuy

That would depend on the mc 😉

HansTheCool:Good sir, does the system get op though, It will be great if I does!
EldridSmith
EldridSmithLv5EldridSmith

When you get a couple hundred chapters so I can binge read.

Overlord_Venus
Overlord_VenusLv14Overlord_Venus

Is this being dropped? Sir author please give some statement regarding future releases cause it's difficult to wait without knowing about status of the book

AlunaSola
AlunaSolaLv10AlunaSola

Your synopsis needs fixing. not fellow jonah. say "Follow Jonah"